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The table shows the share of daily commutes by mode of transport in three cities in 2020.

Compare commuting patterns — Tokyo leans on rail, Amsterdam on bikes, Los Angeles on cars.

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Daily commute mode share, three cities, 2020Daily commute mode share, three cities, 2020CityCar (%)Public transport (%)Bicycle (%)On foot (%)Tokyo12601414Amsterdam22233421Los Angeles789112
The table below shows the percentage of daily commutes made by car, public transport, bicycle and on foot in three cities in 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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