Band 8 model answer
A model answer written to illustrate a Band 8 response to this question, with the rubric breakdown and what carries it. Written by us as a teaching example, not a verified exam script.
“More people are working from home rather than the office. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”8
Overall
8
Task response
8
Coherence & cohesion
8
Lexical resource
8
Grammar
The way we work has shifted markedly in recent years, with a growing proportion of employees performing their duties from home rather than commuting to a central office. In my view, the benefits of this arrangement clearly outweigh the drawbacks.
The most compelling advantage is the time and money saved by eliminating the daily commute. Workers who once spent two hours a day travelling can now redirect that time towards rest, family, or productive work, while also avoiding transport costs and the stress of rush-hour traffic. A second benefit is flexibility: remote employees can often structure their day around personal commitments, which tends to improve both morale and output. Employers gain too, since they can recruit talented staff regardless of location and reduce expenditure on office space.
Admittedly, working from home is not without its difficulties. The clearest disadvantage is professional isolation; without the informal conversations that occur naturally in an office, some employees feel disconnected and find collaboration harder. There is also a risk that the boundary between work and personal life becomes blurred, leading to longer hours and eventual burnout. For a minority who lack a quiet, dedicated workspace, productivity may actually fall.
These concerns, however, can largely be managed through occasional team meetings and clear expectations about availability, whereas the gains in time, cost, and flexibility are substantial and difficult to replicate in a conventional office.
In conclusion, although remote work brings genuine challenges around isolation and overwork, the considerable advantages it offers to both employees and organisations make it, on balance, a positive development.
- •Answers the question head-on: a clear stance (“the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks”) is set in the introduction and held to the end.
- •Both sides are genuinely developed, time, cost and flexibility against isolation and blurred work–life boundaries, and then weighed, not just listed.
- •Precise, natural collocations carry the lexical mark: “professional isolation”, “rush-hour traffic”, “blurred boundaries”, “eventual burnout”.
- •A varied mix of complex sentences with very few slips, in clean single-topic paragraphs.
- •To reach Band 9 the supporting points need more concrete detail, a specific figure or named example rather than general reasoning.
- •A couple of paragraphs lean on the same sentence shape; subtler linking would make the cohesion invisible.
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