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“The line graph shows the percentage of seats held by women in the national parliament of four countries from 2…”Model answer
188 wordsP1The line graph shows the percentage of parliamentary seats held by women in Rwanda, Sweden, the USA and Japan between 2000 and 2020.
P2Overall, Rwanda recorded a dramatic rise to become by far the highest of the four by 2005, while Sweden maintained a consistently high share. The USA and Japan remained considerably lower throughout, though the USA showed a notable increase in the final five years.
P3Rwanda's growth was the most striking feature. From 17% in 2000 the figure surged to 49% in 2005 and climbed to 64% by 2015, before edging down to 61% in 2020. Sweden started at an already high 43% in 2000 and remained broadly stable, ending at 47% in 2020.
P4The USA and Japan both began well below Sweden. The USA held 14% in 2000 and rose gradually to 19% by 2015, before climbing more sharply to 27% in 2020. Japan started at just 5%, grew to 11% by 2010, then slipped to 9% in 2015 and recovered to 10% in 2020, a broadly flat trend. By 2020 the gap between Rwanda at 61% and Japan at 10% was 51 percentage points.
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Varied trend language throughout: 'surged', 'broadly stable', 'fluctuating', 'slipping back', 'exceptional divergence'.
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Sweden's intermediate values (2005, 2010) are not cited; mentioning one would confirm the stability claim more concretely.