“Many governments have introduced taxes on sugary drinks. Is this an effective way to improve public health?”
Cite the UK soft-drinks levy and Mexico's sugar tax. Real data > speculation.
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Read the question twice.
Underline every keyword. The instruction word ("agree", "discuss") decides your structure. Get this wrong and you cap at 5.
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Plan for 5 minutes.
Two body paragraphs. One main idea each. Pick examples BEFORE you write the intro.
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Write your intro last in your head.
Once you know the conclusion, the intro writes itself. Paraphrase the question, don’t copy it.
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Aim for 270–290 words.
Less = task incomplete. More = grammar errors. Stay in the pocket.
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Leave 3 minutes to proofread.
Hunt articles ("a/an/the"), subject-verb agreement, and "make/do" mix-ups. They’re your usual suspects.
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The four traps this question sets
What loses you the band
The four traps this question sets
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Off-topic intro
Paraphrase the question. Don’t broaden it.
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Conclusion that just repeats
Add one new reason. Or a recommendation.
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"Make a damage"
Collocation slip. Use "cause damage".
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"Furthermore. Moreover."
Pick one. Both = robotic.
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