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The maps show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and today.

Describe the changes: farmland to housing, more residential development south of the river, the loss of the shop, addition of a park.

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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and today. Compare them and describe how the village has changed.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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