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“Self-driving cars will be common within a decade. What are the advantages and disadvantages?”8
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Task response
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Coherence & cohesion
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Lexical resource
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Grammar
Many experts predict that self-driving cars will become a common sight on our roads within the next ten years. This prospect brings notable advantages as well as serious disadvantages, both of which merit attention.
The potential benefits are considerable. Because most accidents result from human mistakes such as speeding, distraction, or tiredness, vehicles controlled by software that never loses concentration could make roads markedly safer and save thousands of lives each year. Autonomous cars would also give freedom of movement to people unable to drive, including the elderly and those with disabilities, and could reduce congestion by communicating with one another to maintain a smooth, steady flow of traffic. Passengers, meanwhile, would be free to work, rest, or read during journeys that are currently dead time.
The disadvantages, however, are real. The software could be hacked or could malfunction in unexpected situations, with dangerous results, and millions of professional drivers, of taxis, buses, and lorries, could lose their livelihoods. There are also unresolved legal and moral questions about who is to blame when an autonomous vehicle is involved in a crash, and many people may simply be reluctant to surrender control to a machine they do not fully understand. The vehicles are likely to be expensive when they first appear, too, putting them beyond the reach of ordinary families for years.
In conclusion, self-driving cars could greatly improve road safety, mobility, and efficiency, but they also raise genuine concerns about security, employment, and responsibility. How widely they are adopted will ultimately depend on whether these risks can be addressed convincingly enough to earn the public's trust.
- •Balances the two sides thoroughly and closes with a measured, forward-looking judgement.
- •Ideas are developed with clear causation, human error and safety, vehicle communication and congestion.
- •Accurate lexis: “lose their livelihoods”, “surrender control”, “autonomous vehicle”, “dead time”.
- •Wide range of structures with reliable accuracy and clear paragraphing.
- •Shares some ground with other transport-technology topics; a more distinctive example would sharpen it.
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