“The bar chart shows the share of renewable energy in total final energy consumption in five countries in 2010 and 2020.”

Compare how much of each country's energy mix came from renewable sources across the decade — Iceland, Sweden, Germany, the US and China.

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The bar chart below shows the share of renewable energy in total final energy consumption, expressed as a percentage, in five countries in 2010 and 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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Read the question twice.
Underline every keyword. The instruction word ("agree", "discuss") decides your structure. Get this wrong and you cap at 5.
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Plan for 5 minutes.
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Write your intro last in your head.
Once you know the conclusion, the intro writes itself. Paraphrase the question, don’t copy it.
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Aim for 270–290 words.
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