Band 8 model answer
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“Some argue remote work damages team cohesion and company culture. To what extent do you agree?”8
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Task response
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Coherence & cohesion
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Grammar
The rapid expansion of remote working has prompted genuine concern among managers and organisational theorists about its effect on team cohesion and workplace culture. I agree that remote work poses real risks to these dimensions of organisational life, but believe that with deliberate management, those risks can be substantially mitigated.
When colleagues rarely share a physical space, the informal interactions that build trust and mutual understanding are naturally reduced. Spontaneous conversations at the end of meetings, shared lunches, and incidental corridor exchanges each contribute to a sense of belonging that video calls reproduce only imperfectly. New employees are particularly disadvantaged: without immersion in the day-to-day rhythms of an office, they struggle to absorb organisational norms, identify informal mentors, and build the relationships that accelerate professional development.
Research from multiple industries suggests that cross-functional collaboration also suffers in fully remote environments. When teams are geographically dispersed, communication tends to become more transactional and siloed, with individuals focusing on their defined tasks rather than contributing to the broader organisational mission. Creative problem-solving, which often emerges from unplanned exchanges between people with different expertise, is harder to engineer through scheduled online meetings.
However, dismissing remote work as inherently damaging overstates the case. Many organisations have successfully maintained cohesion through regular in-person retreats, structured virtual social events, clear communication norms, and intentional onboarding processes. The challenge is managerial rather than technological.
On balance, remote work does present genuine threats to cohesion and culture, particularly when adopted without deliberate countermeasures. Organisations that acknowledge these risks and invest in compensating practices, however, can preserve strong cultures even with largely distributed teams.
- •Identifies specific, concrete mechanisms of cohesion loss (informal exchanges, onboarding challenges)
- •Cross-functional collaboration point extends analysis beyond the obvious social dimension
- •Balanced conclusion avoids alarmism while sustaining the core position
- •The mitigating strategies paragraph lists several practices without explaining why any one of them is particularly effective
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