Band 8 model answer
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“Some cities are turning their centres into pedestrian-only zones. Is this a positive or negative development?”8
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Task response
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Coherence & cohesion
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Lexical resource
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Grammar
Many cities worldwide have restricted or eliminated motor traffic from their central areas, creating pedestrian-only zones. I consider this a clearly positive development that improves quality of life, supports local businesses, and contributes to environmental goals.
The most immediate benefit is the transformation of public space into a genuinely shared environment. When streets are freed from vehicles, they become usable by people of all ages and abilities: children can move freely, older residents walk without risk, and social interaction in squares and along thoroughfares increases naturally. The revitalisation of central Copenhagen following its pedestrianisation from the 1960s onwards is a frequently cited example of how removing cars can restore civic life to urban cores.
Local commerce also tends to benefit, contrary to the intuition of business owners who initially resist pedestrianisation. Research from multiple European cities demonstrates that pedestrianised zones attract higher footfall and longer dwell times than equivalent car-accessible streets. When visitors arrive by foot or public transport rather than private vehicle, they tend to browse more broadly and spend more time in the area, supporting a wider range of shops and cafes.
Environmental benefits compound these advantages. Reduced vehicle emissions in city centres improve air quality, with direct consequences for public health in areas where pollution-related respiratory illness is a significant concern.
Critics note that pedestrianisation can disadvantage people with mobility difficulties who rely on private vehicles for access, and businesses that depend on delivery and loading may face operational challenges. These are real practical concerns that require thoughtful design solutions, such as maintained access for blue-badge holders and carefully scheduled delivery windows, rather than objections that undermine the overall case for pedestrian priority.
- •Confident position supported by a specific historical example and research-based claims
- •Logical and well-sequenced paragraphs covering social, economic, and environmental dimensions
- •Practical engagement with counterarguments without conceding the central argument
- •The environmental paragraph, though valid, is relatively brief and would benefit from a more specific illustrative point
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