Band 8 model answer
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“Some say parents should be legally responsible for their children's behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”8
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Grammar
The proposal that parents should bear legal responsibility for their children's conduct is an intuitively appealing response to concerns about juvenile behaviour. I partially agree with this view, as some degree of parental accountability is justified, though blanket legal liability would be both impractical and unjust.
There is a reasonable case that parents who demonstrably neglect their duty to guide and supervise their children should face legal consequences when that neglect directly contributes to harm. If parents are aware that their child is engaging in persistent antisocial behaviour and take no meaningful action, assigning some civil liability for resulting damages acknowledges the genuine causal role of parental conduct. Several jurisdictions already operate on this principle for property damage caused by minors.
However, extending this principle broadly requires caution. Children are shaped by a range of influences beyond the home, including schools, peer groups, online environments, and wider socio-economic circumstances. Holding parents legally accountable for behaviour that arises from factors largely outside their control is manifestly unfair and could disproportionately penalise families already disadvantaged by poverty or social instability. A child who joins a gang despite a parent's sustained efforts to prevent it cannot reasonably be considered evidence of parental failure in any actionable legal sense.
Moreover, the threat of legal sanction may incentivise overly restrictive parenting that inhibits children's development of independence and resilience, which are qualities necessary for their long-term wellbeing.
A more proportionate approach would combine targeted accountability, where clear parental negligence contributes to harm, with investment in family support services that address the underlying conditions associated with problematic juvenile behaviour. Legal responsibility should be a last resort rather than a default instrument.
- •Sophisticated partial-agreement position argued with careful logical distinctions
- •Engages with social determinants of behaviour beyond the family unit
- •Clear and persuasive analysis of why blanket liability is unjust
- •The point about overly restrictive parenting is a valid concern but slightly underdeveloped given its potential analytical weight
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