Band 8 model answer
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“Some cities are encouraging more 24-hour businesses and activities. Is this a positive or negative development?”8
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Grammar
A growing number of cities have actively promoted round-the-clock commercial and cultural activity as a strategy for economic growth and urban vitality. I regard this as a broadly positive development, provided that it is managed with adequate attention to the needs of residents.
The economic case for a thriving night economy is substantial. Businesses operating beyond conventional hours generate employment in hospitality, security, transport, and entertainment that would not otherwise exist. Cities such as Amsterdam and Berlin have formalised this through dedicated night mayor roles, which coordinate licensing, transport, and noise management to allow late-night venues to operate whilst minimising friction with residents. The results have included significant contributions to local tax revenues and the cultural vitality that makes these cities attractive to visitors and skilled workers alike.
Beyond economics, extended urban activity can improve safety. Busy streets and open businesses provide natural surveillance during hours that are traditionally associated with crime and vulnerability. Cities where public space remains animated throughout the night often report lower rates of street crime in those areas, as the casual presence of people discourages antisocial behaviour.
The legitimate concerns relate primarily to residential amenity. Noise, litter, and increased foot traffic in residential neighbourhoods adjacent to entertainment districts can reduce quality of life significantly, particularly for families with children or shift workers who need to sleep during early morning hours. These tensions require careful zoning and robust enforcement of licensing conditions.
On balance, a well-regulated night economy enriches urban life economically and culturally, while the associated problems, though real, are manageable through competent governance rather than being inherent to the concept.
- •Well-structured argument with concrete international policy examples
- •The public safety point is an insightful addition that many essays on this topic overlook
- •Balanced treatment that acknowledges genuine residential concerns
- •The conclusion is competent but somewhat predictable; a more original closing observation would elevate it
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