Band 9 model answer
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“Some experts believe children should start learning a foreign language at primary school. To what extent do you agree?”9
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It is sometimes argued that foreign-language instruction should begin in primary school rather than being delayed until the teenage years. I strongly agree with this view, because young children acquire languages with a natural ease that older learners rarely match, and because an early start yields lasting cognitive and cultural rewards.
The most compelling reason concerns the way young minds absorb language. Research into child development consistently shows that the brain is at its most receptive to new sounds and grammatical patterns before puberty, which is why children who are exposed early tend to achieve a far more authentic accent and an instinctive grasp of structure. A seven-year-old learning French through songs and games internalises it almost effortlessly, whereas a fifteen-year-old must memorise the same rules consciously and laboriously. Capitalising on this window of opportunity is therefore simply efficient.
Beyond pure acquisition, an early start carries wider benefits. Children who grow up navigating two languages are repeatedly shown to develop stronger problem-solving skills and greater mental flexibility, as their minds learn to switch between systems. Just as importantly, encountering another language young fosters curiosity about other cultures and a sense that the world extends beyond one's own borders, an outlook that becomes invaluable in an increasingly interconnected society.
Critics occasionally warn that adding a language might overload young pupils or confuse those still mastering their mother tongue, yet the evidence points the other way: early bilingualism tends to enrich rather than hinder first-language development.
In conclusion, since children are biologically primed to learn languages and gain enduring intellectual and cultural advantages from doing so, I firmly believe that foreign-language teaching should begin in primary school.
- •Answers the “to what extent” task with an unambiguous position that is sustained from the introduction through to the conclusion.
- •Ideas are developed in depth, each paragraph moving from a clear topic sentence to specific, concrete support (the seven-year-old versus the fifteen-year-old).
- •Precise, natural lexis throughout: “most receptive”, “window of opportunity”, “mental flexibility”, “increasingly interconnected”.
- •A genuine counter-argument is raised and rebutted, which strengthens the writer's stance rather than weakening it.
- •The claim that research “consistently shows” would be marginally stronger with a named example, though general reference is perfectly acceptable in Task 2.
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