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“Some say global brands have made cities look the same everywhere. To what extent do you agree?”Model answer
312 wordsP1The spread of global retail and food brands across every continent has prompted the concern that cities worldwide are converging into a single, indistinguishable commercial landscape. I agree with this view to a significant but not unlimited extent, since the evidence of homogenisation is real even if its scope is sometimes overstated.
P2The argument that globalisation has flattened urban distinctiveness is supported by straightforward observation. High streets in London, Tokyo, Shanghai and Buenos Aires share the same coffee chains, fast fashion retailers and hotel groups with a consistency that would have been inconceivable fifty years ago. Beyond visual similarity, these brands carry with them an accompanying culture of consumption, the expectation of standardised menus, air-conditioned interiors and loyalty apps, that subtly reshapes local commercial behaviour and, over time, the habits of the communities it serves. Independent local businesses often cannot compete on price or marketing with multinationals, and their gradual displacement erodes the accumulated commercial character that made each city distinctive.
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P3There are, however, genuine countervailing forces. Consumer appetite for authenticity has fuelled notable revivals of artisan and locally owned businesses in precisely those urban centres most saturated by global brands. The cultural districts of cities like Osaka, Istanbul or Mexico City retain a vitality and particularity that no amount of international branding has wholly extinguished. Language, cuisine, social custom and built heritage are not so easily overwritten as the presence of a familiar coffee logo on a corner might suggest.
P4My assessment is that homogenisation is real at the level of commercial infrastructure and superficial consumption, but overstated as a cultural phenomenon. What global brands actually displace is primarily economic diversity, not cultural identity in any deeper sense.
P5In conclusion, global brands have genuinely made city centres more visually and commercially similar, but the distinctiveness of cities resides in dimensions of culture that remain more resistant to corporate standardisation.