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“Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that w…”Model answer
281 wordsP1Whether competition or cooperation deserves the greater encouragement, at work, in school and in daily affairs, is a question on which sensible people disagree. Some prize competition as an invigorating spur; others would have us collaborate far more. In my estimation, although competition has undeniable uses, cooperation merits markedly greater emphasis than it currently enjoys.
P2Champions of competition argue that it draws out our finest efforts. The urge to surpass one's rivals can drive students to greater diligence and employees to sharper productivity, and a great many human achievements, from scientific milestones to athletic records, owe their existence to the will to prevail. Competition, the argument runs, mirrors the world as it is and steels people for the rigours of adult life.
P3There is merit in this, yet unbridled competition exacts a heavy toll. Once victory becomes the only currency, it can breed anxiety, ruthlessness and a temptation to cut corners, and it consigns the majority to the demoralising status of losers. Cooperation, conversely, yields fruits that no lone individual could harvest. In the workplace, the thorniest problems yield only to teams that pool complementary expertise; in the classroom, pupils who learn shoulder to shoulder often grasp material more deeply while cultivating the empathy and communication that rivalry never imparts.
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P4Balancing the two, I am persuaded that the most fruitful environments blend them but tilt towards cooperation. A measure of good-natured competition can inject energy, provided it operates within a fundamentally collaborative culture rather than displacing it.
P5In conclusion, while competition can motivate and hone us, I am convinced that cooperation produces richer and more humane outcomes, and that schools and workplaces alike ought to do far more to nurture it.